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Writing guide

A structure for every task type, and band-9 model answers with examiner notes. Learn the shape first — then practise it.

Essay structures

Match the prompt to the right type, then follow the paragraph plan. One well-developed idea per paragraph beats a list of three.

Opinion (Agree / Disagree)

The prompt asks how far you agree, or whether you think something is positive/negative. Pick ONE clear position and defend it the whole way through.

Introduction

Paraphrase the statement, then state your position clearly (e.g. “I completely agree that…”). Don't sit on the fence.

Body 1

First reason for your view. Topic sentence → explain → specific example. One idea, developed fully, beats three ideas listed.

Body 2

Second reason (or address the counter-argument, then rebut it). Again: claim → explanation → example.

Conclusion

Restate your position in different words and summarise your two reasons. No new ideas.

Useful phrases

I completely agree that…There are two main reasons for this.The most compelling argument is that…While some claim …, this overlooks the fact that…In conclusion, I firmly believe that…
Discussion (Discuss both views + your opinion)

“Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.” You must cover BOTH sides fairly, then make your own stance clear.

Introduction

Paraphrase both views, then state which you find more convincing — your opinion belongs here, not just in the conclusion.

Body 1

Explain the first view fairly (even if you disagree). Claim → explanation → example.

Body 2

Explain the second view — the one you favour — and show why it is stronger. This is where your opinion is argued.

Conclusion

Recap both views in one line and restate which you support and why.

Useful phrases

On the one hand, some argue that…On the other hand, it can be said that…Proponents of this view believe…Personally, I find the latter argument more persuasive because…Having weighed both sides,…
Problem / Solution (Causes & Solutions)

The prompt names a problem and asks for its causes and/or solutions (sometimes “problems and solutions” or “causes and effects”).

Introduction

Paraphrase the problem and state that this essay will examine its causes and propose solutions.

Body 1 — Causes

Identify one or two root causes. Explain the mechanism, not just the label.

Body 2 — Solutions

Propose realistic solutions that directly address those causes, and say who acts (governments, individuals) and how it helps.

Conclusion

Summarise the main cause and the most effective solution.

Useful phrases

A primary cause of this issue is…This largely stems from…One effective way to tackle this would be to…If governments were to …, this could…Ultimately, addressing … requires…
Advantages / Disadvantages

“Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?” or “Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.” If asked to weigh them, take a clear position.

Introduction

Paraphrase the topic and, if asked to weigh, state whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

Body 1 — Advantages

Develop the main advantage(s) with explanation and example.

Body 2 — Disadvantages

Develop the main drawback(s). If weighing, show why it is outweighed (or not).

Conclusion

Restate the balance and your judgement.

Useful phrases

The chief benefit of … is that…A notable drawback, however, is…Although … carries risks, these are outweighed by…On balance, the advantages are more significant because…

Academic Task 1

Academic Task 1 (chart / graph / table)

Describe visual data (line, bar, pie, table, or a process/map). You are reporting, not giving opinions.

Introduction

Paraphrase the chart title — what it shows, the units, and the time frame. One sentence.

Overview

The most important 2–3 features / biggest trends. No specific numbers here — this paragraph earns the highest marks, so make the big picture obvious.

Details 1

Support the overview with specific figures for one group of data. Compare, don't just list.

Details 2

The remaining data with figures. Group logically (highest vs lowest, rising vs falling).

Useful phrases

The chart illustrates …Overall, it is clear that…The most striking feature is that…… rose steadily / plummeted / plateaued …In contrast, … remained relatively stable at around…

Band-9 model answers

Read how a top answer is built. The notes explain why it scores — copy the technique, not the words.

Task 2Band 9Opinion (Agree / Disagree) · 268 words

Some people believe that university students should pay the full cost of their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that the entire financial burden of a university education should fall on students themselves. I strongly disagree with this view, as heavily subsidised higher education benefits society as a whole and protects equality of opportunity.

The first reason for my position is that a well-educated population is a public good, not merely a private advantage. Graduates become the doctors, engineers and teachers on whom everyone depends, and the taxes they later pay far exceed the cost of their tuition. When Germany abolished tuition fees, for instance, it did so precisely because it viewed skilled graduates as an investment in national prosperity rather than a personal luxury. Requiring students to pay the full cost ignores this collective return.

A second, equally important reason is that full fees would entrench social inequality. If a degree cost tens of thousands of dollars up front, talented students from low-income families would be deterred from applying, while wealthier but less able peers took their places. This is not only unjust to the individuals concerned but also wasteful for the economy, which loses the potential of its brightest citizens. Partial public funding keeps the door to higher education open on the basis of ability rather than wealth.

In conclusion, although students clearly gain personally from their studies, I firmly believe they should not bear the full cost. The wider social and economic benefits of an educated population, together with the need to preserve equal access, make a compelling case for continued public investment in universities.

Why it scores Band 9

  • Task Response: a clear position stated in the introduction and sustained throughout; both reasons are fully developed with explanation + a specific example.
  • Coherence: one central idea per paragraph, signposted with topic sentences and linkers used naturally, not mechanically.
  • Lexical Resource: precise, topic-specific language (“public good”, “entrench social inequality”, “collective return”) rather than memorised phrases.
  • Grammar: a range of complex structures (conditionals, relative clauses) used accurately.
Task 2Band 9Discussion (both views + opinion) · 271 words

Some people think children should start school as early as possible, while others believe they should start later. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions differ as to whether formal schooling should begin in early childhood or be delayed until children are older. While there are clear benefits to an early start, I ultimately side with those who favour a later beginning, as young children learn best through play.

Those who advocate starting school early point to the developmental advantages of structured learning. In their view, exposing children to literacy and numeracy as soon as possible gives them a head start that compounds over time, and the routine of school helps them acquire discipline and social skills. Countries such as the United Kingdom, where children begin at four, reflect this belief in early academic foundations.

On the other hand, a growing body of evidence suggests that pushing formal instruction too early can be counter-productive. Very young children develop language, creativity and emotional resilience most effectively through unstructured play rather than desk-based lessons. Finland, whose pupils do not start school until seven yet consistently rank among the world's best readers, demonstrates that a later, play-centred start does no harm and may even help. Forcing formal study prematurely risks stress and a loss of natural curiosity.

In conclusion, although an early start offers a foundation in basic skills, I believe the evidence favours delaying formal schooling. Allowing children the time to learn through play builds the curiosity and confidence that underpin all later academic success, which is why I consider the later-start approach the wiser one.

Why it scores Band 9

  • Both views are presented fairly and in roughly equal depth — a requirement for a high Task Response on discussion essays.
  • The writer's opinion is clear in the introduction and argued (not just repeated) in body 2 and the conclusion.
  • Real, relevant examples (UK vs Finland) anchor each abstract claim.
Task 1Band 9Academic Task 1 (line graph) · 176 words

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The line graph illustrates how many tourists, measured in thousands, travelled to a Caribbean island each year over an eight-year period from 2010 to 2017, distinguishing between those staying on the island and those staying on cruise ships.

Overall, total visitor numbers rose substantially across the period. While the number of tourists staying on the island remained comparatively stable, the sharp growth in cruise-ship visitors was the main driver of this overall increase, and by the end of the period cruise passengers had overtaken those staying on land.

In 2010, roughly 1.5 million tourists stayed on the island, compared with just 0.25 million on cruise ships. Island visitors climbed gently to a peak of about 1.5 million in 2015 before dipping slightly to 1.4 million in 2017.

Cruise-ship numbers, by contrast, surged from 0.25 million in 2010 to around 2 million in 2017 — an eightfold rise. The two figures converged in 2016, after which cruise visitors clearly predominated.

Why it scores Band 9

  • A concise introduction paraphrases the prompt; a distinct overview paragraph states the big-picture trends with no specific numbers.
  • Data is grouped logically (island vs cruise) and compared, and figures are approximated appropriately (“roughly”, “around”).
  • Varied language of change: “rose substantially”, “climbed gently”, “surged”, “converged”, “predominated”.

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